Well I just merged two drawings together and its a very rough test, haven't begun to think of the title and blurb at the back. The idea is a brain filled with fog and branches/wires that lead to the almighty smashed window to symbolise the break of freedom some of them are left with... its pretty gloomy . I'm trying other ideas out too but let me know what you think.
I like it but I think the fog makes the cracked glass a bit unclear...
ReplyDeleteYea I agree its not very clear at all, if it seeped out of the cracks maybe that would work? Also I thought the fog/ brain shape might go at the front and put the crack at the back page for more space for blurb? Might try other colours for the fog perhaps.
DeleteI think if the fog was a slightly different colour or even just lighter, it might separate it a bit from the crack. Not sure about which to put on front and which on back. Try both!
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